Слайд 1DONE BY: ALEX ^_^
CORRECTION OF THE ESSAY
Слайд 2THE ORIGINAL ESSAY #1
Hi Alice! How are you? What’s new? How
you know I’m in Ukraine now. I like ti live in this country. I’m studying in the Yaroslav the Wise National Law University of Ukraine in Kharkov. I have shorter hours of learning and more time for relax than in England. Also we have longer holidays thus we often go walking with my friends. My Ukrainian friends friendlier and funnier. They have better sense of humor than our people. People there more reserved. I like local food. We very often eat cousine dishes. It’s very tasty. Winter in Kharkov is more colder than England but the summer is hotter. I really like this city and my new friends. How about you? I look forward your answer. With love, Jane.
Слайд 3HIGHLIGHTED MISTAKES
Hi Alice! How are you? What’s new? How you
know I’m in Ukraine now. I like ti live in this country. I’m studying in the Yaroslav the Wise National Law University of Ukraine in Kharkov. I have shorter hours of learning and more time for relax than in England. Also we have longer holidays thus we often go walking with my friends. My Ukrainian friends friendlier and funnier. They have better sense of humor than our people. People there more reserved. I like local food. We very often eat cousine dishes. It’s very tasty. Winter in Kharkov is more colder than England but the summer is hotter. I really like this city and my new friends. How about you? I look forward your answer. With love, Jane.
Слайд 4CORRECTED MISTAKES
Hi Alice! How are you? What’s new? As you
know I’m in Ukraine now. I like to live in this country. I’m studying in the Yaroslav the Wise National Law University of Ukraine in Kharkov. I have less hours of learning and more time to relax than in England. Also we have a lot more holidays that’s why, we often go walking with my friends. My Ukrainian friends nice, kind and funny. They have better sense of humor than our people. People there more reserved. I like local food. We very often eat cousine dishes. It’s very tasty. Winter in Kharkov is more colder than England but the summer is hotter. I really like this city and my new friends. How about you? I look forward your answer. With love, Jane.
Слайд 5BIT MORE DETALIES
Hi Alice! How are you? What’s new? As
you know I’m in Ukraine now. I like to live here.Its really good country and I might stay here for longer time. I’m studying in the Yaroslav the Wise National Law University of Ukraine in Kharkov. Surprisingly I’ve learned the local languages pretty fast, and now I study in Ukrainian & Russian. I have less hours of learning, because classes are shorter here, so I have more time to relax and have fun, then I used to in England. Also we have a lot more holidays, that’s why we often go walking with my friends. My Ukrainian friends nice, kind and funny. They have better sense of humor than our people. People there more reserved. I like local food, especially the sweets, they make really good chocolate here. We very often eat cousine dishes. It’s very tasty. Winter in Kharkov is more colder than England but for people here winter is not cold at all. On the other hand summer is very hot and beach is always full of people. I enjoy it a lot, I really like this city and my new friends. How about you? I look forward for your answer. With love, Jane.