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I’m writing to you because I want to tell you about my excellent discovery. When I was in Hungary I visited a small town that famous its delicious marzipans. The town called Szentendre. It’s a really good place for artists, tourists and travelers. By the way precisely artists opened this town for world. Szentendre has many interesting museums, shops and churches. The most unusual museum is a museum of marzipans. This place look fantastic because all of the things there made of marzipan. For example, they have marzipan Michael Jackson and Princess Diana. I have photos both of them. This statues have only one minus there are not edible. I recommend you to visit Szentendre and museum of marzipan. You will receive many happy emotions because I know that you like sweets also like I. I look forward for your latter. See you soon.

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I’m writing to you because I want to tell you about my excellent discovery. When I was in Hungary I visited a small town that is famous its delicious marzipans. The town called Szentendre. It’s a really good place for artists, tourists and travelers. By the way precisely artists opened this town for world. Szentendre has many interesting museums, shops and churches. The most unusual museum is a museum of marzipans. This place look fantastic because all of the things there made of marzipan. For example, they have marzipan Michael Jackson and Princess Diana. I have photos both of them. This statues have only one minus there are not edible. I recommend you to visit Szentendre and museum of marzipan. You will receive many happy emotions because I know that you like sweets also like I . I look forward for your latter. See you soon.

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I’m writing to you because I want to tell you about my excellent discovery. When I was in Hungary I visited a small town that is famous its delicious marzipans. The town called Szentendre. It’s a really good place for artists, tourists and travelers. By the way precisely artists opened this town for world. Szentendre has many interesting museums, shops and churches. The most unusual museum is a museum of marzipans. This place look fantastic because all of the things there made of marzipan. For example, they have marzipan Michael Jackson and Princess Diana. I have photos both of them. This statues have only one negative thing, they are not edible. I recommend you to visit Szentendre and museum of marzipan. You will receive many happy emotions because I know that you like sweets also like me/I do . I look forward for your latter. See you soon.

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